A Good Friend
We look for in other people things that we don’t have, maybe qualities that we want that other people give us or people that we want to be. So for this reason when I meet a person and I think that she or he can be my friend I see how is she or he inside, what qualities she has, and how does she behaves with other people with her family and what will happen if I need her help in some moment of the life, I prefer someone who is reliable.
The friends are important people in our lives; they´re like sisters or brothers, they’re with you in all the moments where you need them and especially they give you their unconditional help and friendship even if you don’t have money or richness. A friend is an angel in your life is a blessing of God because they can listen to you when you have a problem and they can help with advices and support.
I am a person who likes to have a lot of friends, but I want the most important thing in a friend, someone who has a big heart with sense of humor too and maybe someone who is intelligent but I think that everyone is intelligent in his/her own way, everyone has good things to teach us.
If there are two manner of people, one is a person with money but he is terrible as a person, he doesn’t help other people, he doesn’t teach me good things, he doesn’t contributes with good causes and other who hasn’t money and he is with me in all the moments of the life, he cries with me, he smiles with me and has a beautiful personality and I have to choose someone I prefer the second one; because we need people in our lives that contribute to our developing in a good way, people that share with us the most important moments, people that be able to give all for us, people that teach all the things that they known and can help us to grow as persons and you can trust in them always.
I believe that you answered the question thoroughly because yo explained it all the things that you want in a friend and why for, and this made that the essay pretty clear to understand, also every point was developed, organized and cohesivily when you used the examples to made us unnderstand the reasons why do you prefer this kind of people for give you heart as a good friend, the grammar structures was properly used with accuracy as was the vocabulary I think that you have a advance vocabulary, for me was a pretty good essay. Congrats
ReplyDeleteI love it .....Nata ...because you said all the important qualities for a friendship.. I like when you said that the friends are like a brothers or sisters because because as the time passes we try with the people with more intensity ant They become like our family ,,, the become important people in our life .
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